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 ## Connectivity Check
 
-Connectivity checks on Android [do not go through the VPN tunnel](https://mullvad.net/en/blog/2022/10/10/android-leaks-connectivity-check-traffic/) (they are not supposed to anyway). This is generally not a cause for concern, however, you should be aware that Google and a network observer outside of the VPN provider and their infrastructure can see that there is an Android device with your actual IP address.
+Connectivity checks on Android [do not go through the VPN tunnel](https://mullvad.net/en/blog/2022/10/10/android-leaks-connectivity-check-traffic/) (they are not supposed to anyway). This is generally not a cause for concern, however, you should be aware that Google and a network observer on your internet service provider (ISP)'s network can see that there is an Android device with your actual IP address.
 
-On GrapheneOS, connectivity checks by default are done with GrapheneOS's own servers, instead of the Google ones. Said network observer can see that you are using a GrapheneOS device. If you want to appear like a regular Android device instead, go to **Settings** → **Network & internet** → **Internet connectivity check** and select **Standard (Google)** instead.
+On GrapheneOS, connectivity checks by default are done with GrapheneOS's own servers, instead of with Google ones. A network observer on your ISP’s network can see that you are using a GrapheneOS device. If you are using a VPN and want to appear like a regular Android device to your ISP, go to **Settings** → **Network & internet** → **Internet connectivity check** and select **Standard (Google)** instead.
 
 If you want to, you can disable connectivity check altogether. Note that this will stop captive portal from working.